there was no music in the air,
not really,
just the sound of a sound
which made me mad
'cos i hoped i would find
not sure what but
kept scanning tunes and
endless minutes nothing
but highway, agression
and the sense of a drug i didn't take
and don't understand, dazing
emissions fog,
mingle with sun
and the smell makes me vomit
spring-bound winds
sneakin' onto my shoulders,
crawl up my arms and i
need it louder,
force gears, heat up, windows down
and stuck in the middle,
clueless moves - from and to
i don't know and don't care
when he spells - music, questions
with mellow voice,
words and more words and
that's where it starts,
there it is,
magic, it plays, it is me - again
on the map, out on the street,
close to the sound and
somehow,
it made sense again
ok - this was me in the car last week when i drove back home from work, listening to Mike Oldfield's Tubular Bells - and yes - i was in a strange mood..

linking up with One Shot Wednesday - and - woo-hoo - yesterday in NYC we won the Shorty Award in Art.. thanks to all of you for your votes, your support and for being around and making One Stop Poetry what it is!
ok - this was me in the car last week when i drove back home from work, listening to Mike Oldfield's Tubular Bells - and yes - i was in a strange mood..

linking up with One Shot Wednesday - and - woo-hoo - yesterday in NYC we won the Shorty Award in Art.. thanks to all of you for your votes, your support and for being around and making One Stop Poetry what it is!
33 Comments:
Awesome! Congratulations!
it was probably all those exhaust fumes... and a BIG congrats on the shorty award!!!
Tubular Bells can do that. Great words.
I love TUBULAR BELLs. Trying to think when I last saw that vinyl album. I think one of my kids may have made off with it.
I like the images and the way you put this together. So strong and vibrant and vibrating. You always amaze, dearest Claudia. This is superb.
Excellent bit, I like highways.
You've definitely given this that genuine frazzled feel, and the sense of a surreal clanging in the head accompanying a hectic crammed, place full of fumes--sometimes, depending on where you are, odd moods are the perfectly natural result. And congratz again on the award--well-deserved!
Far Out!
And congratulations to One Stop!
Claudia, I felt, as if, I were in the car with you. Wonderful descriptions there. Tubular Bells is a haunting piece of music.
Congrats on the award!
Pamela
Congrats Claudia ! Let me download this piece of music and listen. Sounds good !
woohoo! my friend, just walked in the door...congrats! it was so frickin awesome...next year...you will be there with us....cause we going back! smiles.
a lovely piece c...after driving for 9 hours...i feel every word of this...lol
It's hypnotic
spring-bound winds
sneakin' onto my shoulders,
crawl up my arms and i
need it louder,....
I know this has happened to me Claudia....different song...same mood
As spring approaches here, I do hope to feel this again.
Congrats on OneStop Shorty Awards!
Sadly, I am old enough to remember the tune when it was in regular rotation on the radio. Nicely visual and impressionistic piece of work.
Whoo Hooo! indeed
And tubular Bells is one of my all time favourite!
You could have titled this "Rush Hour" - I've spent many a rush hour just like that.
Congratulations on the Shorty, Claudia. Thank you for your contribution to giving us this wonderful forum.
Wonderful music, to the movement of a city and its sounds...lovely and a beautiful way to celebrate a well deserved award...bkm
Congrats on the award Claudia. You guys should all be so proud for the recognition of all the hard work that you do. Woohoo! Cheers to you!
But the effect is just wonderful! It does make sense indeed.. I loved reading it for its imagery Claudia..
I have been wondering if you are the one associated with OSP since yesterday night (India).. your posting the award here made me understand..
Congratulations n loads n loads of celebrations! Ver well done My Dear.. :D
Hugs xx
ahhhh,once again..."TUBULAR BELLS" nice.
excellent
I don't think it matters where you get your inspiration from, tubular bells, well, if it brings forth poetry like this I might give it a go!
always a good read with you
Peace, hp
strange mood or not, I come here for a musical event, and you never disappoint. I can feel the music, hear it, in your poetry.
Lady Nyo..makes me wiggle and pop.
"Tubular Bells" was such a strange hit for the times, rich with the synth that would roll over rock n roll like a tsunami. (I think of contemporaries to the song like "Dark Side of the Moon," "Court of the Crimson King," "Watcher of the Skies," and "Frankenstein') A strange new wild drone or grace-note which affected and afflicted rock culture with something near yet far: Nice morph of that sound into its personification in a lover. Irresistible yet alien. - Brendan
Claudia,
This poem was fantastic! The idea that music is not a single sound, there are alot of those around. Rather it is a string of sounds and it is up to the individual if they see it as music. Great piece and meaning. Thank you for sharing.
We carry music inside us - hearts, minds and souls.
Very nice, Claudia!
I remember those days in the car, stuck in traffic, and then that great piece of music that made it all seem better.
Claudia, congratulations on an award so well deserved!!!
No fun feeling drugged without having taken anything. You describe this strange mood so well.
Very cool. I can relate to the imagery of random sounds, smells thoughts. Drive safely, lol.
Ok what were you on, this poem is simple yet it is by far one of the best poems I have read, I really do enjoy descriptive poems, it gives one a story to follow...
It may have been a strange mood, but I suspect most of us can identify with it, Claudia.
Sometimes the best potry comes when we are in a trance, eh? You hae beautifully captured your trance like state.
Congrats on the Award! Rockin'! And yes good poem. I remember seeing this one on the board. Great one shot!
Warmest Salad Cloudy
Luke x
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