falling from the trees,
we let them spin and drift
like sailors, drunk with gin,
watched them circling
towards the tongue of the river,
then.. disappear
faces hot with sweat
and dreams of the real ones,
smelling of big adventure,
Platoon - Apocalypse Now
and named Cobra,
Black Shark or Mangusta
They would take us
to places we saw on tv with
bold men fighting for what
we hoped was right and
all afternoon, dirty hands and
scratched hearts we let them
fall and fall until the sun came down
and our knees started bleeding
until the rotors spun in our heads
until we were almost there and
until the trees had lost all their seeds
linking up with emily at imperfect prose..
18 Comments:
Love this, great images. My only tiny nit is to wonder what kind of trees they are.
Hi Claudia,
How are you doing? . Very nicely penned down the images come clear of scene. Lovely.
Take care
keep smiling
hey val - it's maple trees..
very evocative
We used to split them open and stick them on our noses. We were so clever! lol
we would drop them off bridges to give them plenty of room to twirl down...very nice claudia...
Great imagery. I like the juxtaposition of childhood imagination with the imaginary world of the cinema...
War does no good.
But your poetry does.
The first stanza made me think kids were dropping maple tree seeds from a bridge.
xoxo
Hi! Claudia...
Your poetry is beautiful...and your words do conjure up children at play too...
...This "stanza" brings to mind children playing until they were exhausted..."scratched hearts we let them fall and fall until the sun came down and our knees started bleeding..."
postscript:I had to Google the image of Maple Trees Helicopter seed" and now I understand the title of your poem.
Great use of conjuring up a very vivid mental image.
Thanks, for sharing!
DeeDee ;-D
Very well done. I like the fact you mention movies. These flicks we've seen and make what you're writing about read more real. I have yet to read a poem of yours I didn't like or did not got something out of it.
wow, is that a beautifully strong close to a terrific piece. what a lovely, aching bow to wrap up the poem.
beautiful, dear claudia... i love how i lay there watching them spinning down ... you put me in the moment, friend (as you always do). and to reassure you re: my post, i still am pregnant with kasher... the miscarriage i wrote of happened before aiden was born. i believe she was a girl. thank you so much for your love...
Smokin' poem.
Apocalypse now is an incredible albeit very strange film
Nice references - these movies, less adventure and more horror in many regards to be sure...
Beautiful piece, Claudia, such imagination...with striking images for us all around.
wonderful, claudia - brought back many memories for me.
this makes me think of all those wasted moments in humans lives..., yet everything happens for some reason... say, to create this wonderful poem
Cool poem and that picture of Mount Pilatus from a few days ago is breathtaking. Do you live in Switzerland or are you visiting?
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