Tuesday, April 5, 2011

thirsty for life

bowing low
next to B3, the road
which runs 
from south to north, north to south
without ever breathing 
or sighing or loving those who travel it. 
he, grey hair, back bent in sorrow,
flowers in hand, small cross
morning, mourning
rips my heart raw, bloody
as we pass, blowing
fourteen meters swaying wind into his face, 
then leaving him alone again,
touching concrete grief for seconds, wish
i knew the story
wish i could - hold him close,
laying down
blossoms of sadness, of hope
for the people i've lost on my way

to speed, to carelessness & lovelessness,

toss the driver from his seat, take
the steering wheel & turn on the wipers, erase the tears,
tears welling up like mean dwarves

and i long
for petals raining down,
for a cross to bow before and
an arm, wrapped 'round my heart,
telling it there's a new road,
another north to south, an
east to west and a hope
to find what gets lost
so easy at the side
of madness-covered routes

and i'm breathing, breathing tears and their taste, 
salt on my lips
makes me thirsty for life


linking up with One Shot Wednesday - and i'm still on the road, still traveling - but will try to comment back by the end of the week...

41 Comments:

Brian Miller said...

you have the heart claudia...i am often moved by those i see...let your compassion bleed perfuming the air...

cianphelan said...

I can taste it, life, the thirst that ever stirs....so close, so far....a lovely yearning, Claudia, a delightful embrace of the world. And I particularly enjoy this stanza: "toss the driver from his seat, take
the steering wheel & turn on the wipers, erase the tears,
tears welling up like mean dwarves" for the image it brings. Such a collage there. Like mean dwarves...

Hope your travels are treating you well, Claudia! I know the road can wear a person down...but business or no, I hope some of the sights will inspire and invigorate you!

Anthony Desmond said...

really beautiful.... raw emotion bleeds throughout this piece.

Who Is Afraid of Alfred Hitchcock? said...

Hi! Claudia...
Your words as always are...beautiful! always, thought-provoking and very reflective.
Claudia, God-speed!

Take care while on your journey!
DeeDee ;-)

Hope said...

tears in my heart clouded my eyes as i read this emotional piece, Claudia.

I felt it every word, even the unspoken ones.

take care, be well!

thank you for sharing

Eva Gallant said...

I wish I possessed your eloquence.

sonny said...

as long as you have the thirst....

Pete Marshall said...

i felt the loneliness of a journey where we have too long to reflect and start watching the lives of others as we pass by...hope all is well cheers pete

emily wierenga said...

wish for a cross to lay down

oh claudia, your words are this cross... how you lay across the page, soul and heart... i love this.

poemblaze said...

Excellent wordcraft as usual! Great poem.

anthonynorth said...

The emotion reaches out and grabs the reader.

Elaine said...

A very moving piece.

wolfsrosebud said...

Compassion is something missing in life... thanks for showing a bit of your heart.

rockp88l said...

'touching concrete grief for seconds' - it's true, grief can be palpable. Such a sad piece Claudia but with a little lift of hope at the end.

Carys

LauraX said...

"telling it there's a new road,
another north to south, an
east to west and a hope
to find what gets lost"

love this Claudia!!!

River said...

beautiful piece Claudia :)

signed...bkm said...

Wow Claudia, so many crosses on the side of the road..so much time lost to tears and all of it seemingly so meaningless...far to many crosses on the side of roads..throughout the world...bkm

Monkey Man said...

You are amazing at capturing passion and emotion.

haikulovesongs said...

beautiful poem ~

"and i'm - breathing, breathing tears and their taste,
salt on my lips
makes me thirsty for life"

stunning! ♥

Louise Gallagher said...

Oh wow!

'wipe the tears away'

Oh wow!

Andy said...

Very touching poem.

emmettwheatfall.com said...

If I have not told you before, I want to tell you now, you are one of my favorite poets. Your poetry is a thing of beauty. Keep speaking to us.

stillfugue.com said...

I love the feeling in this. The compassion is intense and it grows more and more. The flow is so good. I could identify with the person who is seeing this and wanting the story. This is just fabulous work - One of the best I have seen in the community this year.

Jerry said...

Passion and com-passion. A heart for those whom you pass. Yours is a north-south heart which stops along the side of those hurting. Thanks for sharing.

KB said...

Take care on those travels.

Leslie said...

"wish
i knew the story
wish i could - hold him close,
laying down
blossoms of sadness, of hope
for the people i've lost on my way"

i know this feeling...

Beachanny said...

So many sad songs today. Why should springtime bring the edge of woe; but nobody does the blues any better than you or puts her sensitivities to fore any better than you do Claudia. Even in this piece your music floats out on a minor key. Beautiful.

blueoran said...

This makes a chapel of all those roadside memorials to the car-crashed dead I see here in Florida which fade to dust so fast. Thanks for holding the image like a crucifix close to your heart. - Brendan

Olivia said...

This is intense Claudia!
Very well expressed..

Tears are often what is left after a long episode.. That space is always what remains!

Tears fill those up and yet are never filled enough..

Hugs xoxox

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

Hold close the ones you still have, Claudia. Strong piece!

Steve E said...

OHHHH BABY! This one is wonderfully, powerfully written, yet displays the weakness, the frustrations we all feel when we encounter one--or a dozen--with whom we wish to know, to touch, to heal or be healed.

Did I say I love this piece?--grin!
PEACE!

gautami tripathy said...

Deep piece...


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gost of a rose

Joanne said...

So many crosses, indeed. Here they are ubiquitous, but we rarely see the human hearts affected. Thanks for feeling their pain, our pain. Beautifully done, and the rhythm of the road is palpable in lines.

hedgewitch said...

Powerful and real, Claudia. if only we could give the comfort and take it as well...sometimes it seems to hide from us, the way to do that.

Jinksy said...

I like the compassion expressed in this. :)

Mama Zen said...

What a sad picture, Claudia. Beautifully written.

kristinafarrow said...

Beautiful, passionate writing and a lovely poem.

hpicasso said...

somber and sincere...this is one of your most impassioned writes Claudia

Peace, hp

Big Sur Blogisphere said...

Who could live
And miss the occasional
Landscapes of sorrow?
Are the walls of homes
Thick enough
To insulate us from
Our crashing mortality?
Are our necks long
Enough
To hide in the gritty
Sand
Of denial?
And when, perchance,
we stumble over the graphic
Truth
Unbidden and unprepared,
There it is,
The clutching tremors
Of our compassion.


OneLove--Tiger

Garish Fantasy said...

Stunning Claudia
...Bravo

RMP said...

absolutely beautiful...the emotion jumped off the screen...